We are doing a grey tone picture in art class and this is my painting on November, 30. Even though it is not done you can see that it is starting to take shape. When we had a feedback session in class i got the following comments:

What does the painting look like?

Youssef: It looks like a room and a table.

Oakley: It looks like a lamp with a light beam.

What do you like about the painting?

Oakley: I like that the lamp stands out from the rest of the picture.

(me: I am actually supposed to paint the lamp darker than its surroundings to make it look like it is in front of the other objects. This was only a coincidence.)

What could be improved in the painting?

Jon Sondre: Maybe a visible beam from the lamp?

Questions

Mr. Roman: What greys are you going to use on the lamp?

Answer: I am going to use a bit darker grey on the lamp than on the table and background.